Fourth and last page of the ones previously uploaded. That leaves nine left in the chapter, for those curious, or confused by my horrible lack of clarity. Well, anyway, now comes the challenge of writing new dialogue for each successive page! WOO! The first chapter will give you a rough fix on what exactly is going on in this bizarre world. And why is Laus' touch so painful anyway? And why is... and what was...? And other questions you have, besides "Why does your art suck?" will be answered throughout the story. Or turned into even more outlandish questions.... such as "
Is Rei,
like, my mother?" Well, obviously not exactly. As much as she's been
cloned, this is not a work in fact inspired in anyway by NGE, as I came up with the story well prior to watching it. Also. I'd hit copyright issues for sure. And rightfully so. In order to keep entertaining or torturing you with my art and writing, I'll avoid stealing characters.
Transcript:
Laus (Thought): What is this? Why did she do that? Why?
I was only trying to help! She didn't need to do that! Now she'll die! There's nothing I can do!
I can't believe that she did that! What can I do? Run?
If that is all? I have to! Don't stop! Run!
Mason: She's not going to just die, you know...
Laus: What?
Mason: She needs a bit more of your help than just a touch for that... a cut wrist? She'll survive it. For now...
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